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Commentsthough I have to say, it hurts if you think it was your face xDDD
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Critiques
How about adding some paint buckets and having these tiny people actually paint the image onto parts of her? Other parts could be scraped off or show the texture of an underlying material. This sure leaves room for a lot of experimentation
One thing that bothers me a tiny bit is the bottom of the image. She basically just continues on until the edge, which causes the image to feel like there is no physical ground. Now I realise that is a rather stylized piece, I just think it would be cool to maybe have her neck sit on some sort of platform, pedestal or similar structure. Sort of like busts are sometimes mounted.
Lastly, I think you could reframe the piece a little by adding more space to the bottom and compressing it a bit more at the top.
Phew, I hope you don't mind the couple points I made. The piece certainly is quite interesting already as it is. The busy look is quite enjoyable, and I like the contrast between the black silhouettes and the fully visible main...figure
Daniel
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